Us
One day
when we are old
we may
finally share the same shade of colour.
We may
finally both be grey.
Yet it is
my hair that will be grey,
not
my withered-up heart.
One day
you may finally realise
the pain
and anger you bought.
The
people loved by the One Half,
are equally
hated by the Other Half.
By You.
You
are the person with evil and spite,
yet I am
the one looked down upon.
How is
that not wrong?
One day
you may finally have children too,
as loved
and happy as mine were.
Were.
Before
you spat on their feet
and threw
stones at their heads.
All of
us, just animals in a zoo to you.
One day
we will die out,
none of
us left to protect the world.
Imagine
that. A world full of Whites.
Would
that make you happy?
Would it?
Would
it?!
Then
happy you will be,
just as
long as I don't have to live
to see
the world burn, burn, burn.
Until
there is nothing left but black ash.
Black
trees.
Black
houses.
Until
there is nothing left of You.
But plenty left of Us.
~Opinions?
Amy I love you
ReplyDeleteI don't believe in love, but thanks nevertheless!
DeleteFantastic
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteOh wow, that was really good! I am not half that great at poetry... wish I was ;p
ReplyDelete~Layla
I'm really not too sure about it but thanks!
DeleteNot bad. I did get confused though but you did it-- you wrote a poem! :)
ReplyDeleteAhaha, that I did!
DeleteHehe! :)
Deletewoww. your writing is fantastic..like honestly, award-winning (:
ReplyDeletexoxo
wowww. your writing is fantastic..like honestly, award-winning (:
ReplyDeletexoxo
No but thank you anyway!
DeleteGreat writing. :)
ReplyDeleteTane ♥
Thirteen-year-old me appreciates it!
DeleteP.S. Gonna do your blog design after all. I'll contact you with details soon, just sit tight. :)
ReplyDeleteTane, that's awesome, thank you!
Delete(Hey, it's Ivana from Teenage Bookworms. This is my new blog. I've been busy setting it up - sorry for not replying to any of your comments back.)
ReplyDeleteAMY! This poem is amazing! I feel lucky and honored just to be able to read it, wow.
Honestly, you are so talented. Do you write in your spare time? :)
Oh and yeah, as of your question - I would be more than honored to write your monthly guest post, if the spot isn't taken yet. Thanks! :D
PS. I tagged you in the Liebster Awards. It's on my blog :3
PPS. I missed talking to you. <3
Ivana, it's honestly fine don't worry!
DeleteThank you so much! I'm really not too sure about it, but I thought I'd post it nevertheless. Sadly, I don't have much time for writing as I'm currently undertaking my GCSEs and have to study, but I do miss the easy flow of writing.
And that would be great! If you could email it to me before the 28th of the month I'll have it posted.
I realised, but unfortunately I haven't got much time for awards and never seem to fill the requirements and then feel guilty that someone else missed on it.
And ugh me toooooo!
Your writing is so very, very, beautiful and amazing. Lovely post Amy! :)
ReplyDeleteGrace xxx ♥
Thank you so much! *blushes*
DeleteI just remembered! Since I'm in your blogosphere, would you mind changing the URL now that I've switched blogs? Thank you Amy <3
ReplyDeleteOf course I'll do it right now!
DeleteSuch a great poem, Amy! You have a true talent for writing. I love forward to your future work.
ReplyDeleteXoxo. Alexis @ Lexi Swoons
Thank you!
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